The Painting

The Painting
A Short Story by Vasu Gangapalli
Based on my 100 Fiction by same name.

The first time Ranjit saw The Painting, it was hanging in an old art store on the outskirts of the city — dimly lit, the air thick with the scent of varnish and turpentine.

It was mesmerizing.
A mist-covered valley stretched into the distance, bathed in a grayish hue. In the middle of that vast, lonely scene stood a solitary figure — a man, small and indistinct, facing away from the viewer. Something about that posture, that stillness, made Ranjit uneasy.

“Beautiful, isn’t it?” said the shopkeeper, an old man with pale eyes that seemed to look right through him.
“It’s… haunting,” Ranjit replied softly.
The man smiled faintly. “It’s not for everyone. Some say the artist disappeared after painting it.”

Ranjit chuckled nervously. “Vanished? That’s… dramatic.”
The shopkeeper simply nodded. “Dreams have a way of keeping what we desire most.”

Ranjit wasn’t sure what that meant, but he couldn’t tear his eyes away. Against his better judgment, he bought it.




That night, the dreams began.

The painting’s valley appeared before him — silent, endless, shrouded in pale mist.
He could smell the damp earth, hear the soft whistle of a distant breeze. The figure stood in the middle of it, just as it had in the painting, motionless.

When Ranjit tried to move closer, the mist thickened. The figure turned slightly, revealing the faint outline of a face that wasn’t clear — but somehow, eerily familiar.
He woke up gasping, drenched in sweat.

For the next few nights, the dream returned.
Each time, the figure was a little closer.




By the seventh night, he could almost hear it whispering — though the words were lost in the fog.
Ranjit stopped sleeping properly. His eyes darkened, his smile faded. His friends noticed.

“You need a break,” said his friend Karan one evening, visiting his apartment.
Ranjit gave a weak laugh. “It’s just a dream. I’m fine.”
But Karan’s eyes drifted to The Painting hanging above the couch. “That’s the thing you bought from that creepy shop?”
Ranjit nodded.
Karan frowned. “The guy in it looks… odd. Is it just me, or is he turned a little more to the left?”

Ranjit froze. He hadn’t noticed that before.
When Karan left, Ranjit stared at the painting for a long time. The figure was turned slightly more — almost as if it had shifted while he wasn’t looking.

He laughed to himself. “Get a grip, man.”

But when lightning flashed outside, he could swear — just for a second — the painted man’s head tilted toward him.




The dream that night was different.
Ranjit stood at the edge of the valley again, but this time, the figure wasn’t there.

“Hello?” he called into the fog.
No answer. Only the echo of his own voice.

Then he saw footprints ahead — deep, fresh ones — leading toward the center of the valley. Without thinking, he followed.

The mist swirled around him like a living thing, pulling him forward. The air grew colder, heavier, until he could barely breathe.

And then, he saw it — a second painting.
An easel stood in the middle of the valley, and on it was a blank canvas. A brush floated in mid-air, dripping black paint.

A voice whispered from behind him. “It needs another soul to finish it.”

He turned — and saw the figure from the painting standing inches away.
Its face was his own.

Ranjit screamed.




He didn’t wake up.

When Karan came the next morning, the apartment door was unlocked. The place was quiet, except for the faint hum of the ceiling fan.
Ranjit was nowhere to be found. His phone, keys, and wallet were still there.

But The Painting was different.

The mist looked thicker now, and the figure inside was clearer.
It was unmistakably Ranjit — standing alone in the valley, staring blankly into the fog.




Weeks passed.

The police filed a missing person report. The news barely covered it.
Ranjit’s relatives searched everywhere but found nothing.

One evening, a man named Arvind, a distant cousin, came to collect Ranjit’s belongings. When he saw The Painting, he froze.

There was something hypnotic about it — the stillness, the despair.
He couldn’t look away.

“Beautiful,” he murmured. “It feels… alive.”

Despite the family’s protests, Arvind decided to keep it.




That night, he dreamt of the valley.

The same gray mist. The same silence.
Only this time, he saw Ranjit — standing in the distance, motionless.

“Ranjit!” he called out.
No response.

He ran toward him, but no matter how far he went, Ranjit stayed the same distance away.

Then, suddenly, Ranjit turned — and smiled.

Arvind woke up screaming.




The next morning, there was a knock on his door.
When he opened it, a man stood there, disoriented, trembling — clothes torn, eyes wide with confusion.

“I… I don’t know where I’ve been,” the man whispered. “There was fog… endless fog… and I could hear my own voice calling.”

It was Ranjit.

Arvind’s mouth went dry. “Ranjit? You—you were gone for weeks!”

Ranjit looked around the room, confused — until his gaze fell on the wall behind Arvind.
His expression changed.

“The painting,” he said hoarsely. “Where is it?”

Arvind frowned. “What do you mean? It’s right—”
He turned.

The wall was empty.
The painting was gone.

Ranjit smiled faintly, his eyes distant. “It found another one.”

Before Arvind could respond, Ranjit stepped outside — and vanished into the fog rolling down the street.

That night, the old shopkeeper in the city’s corner art store unlocked his door, humming softly.
He dusted off a new canvas and hung it beside the others.

It showed a misty valley…
and now, two figures standing together in the fog.


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